Showing posts with label Kristin Bartley Lenz. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Kristin Bartley Lenz. Show all posts

Friday, December 26, 2025

Previous Mentorship Winners Reflect on the Experience

The SCBWI-MI mentorship program began in 2000. The application period for the 2026 novel mentorship with author Sheela Chari opens January 2, 2026 (with the winner announced in April). Today we hear from two previous novel mentorship winners about the experience. Joan Donaldson won the 2022-2023 mentorship and Kristin Bartley Lenz won a mentorship in 2018-2019.



1. How was the experience applying (were you nervous? had you applied before?)?

Joan Donaldson
Joan Donaldson: I had never applied before and didn't expect to win, so I was surprised and thrilled.


Kristin Bartley Lenz: The application process was easy because I already had a finished/revised manuscript that was ready to go, and it was my third time applying for the mentorship with various manuscripts over the years. I was probably quite nervous the first time I applied when I was new to SCBWI, but with each entry, I received encouraging, helpful feedback. I knew that even if I didn’t win the competition, my writing would benefit.


2. How was the mentorship experience itself?

JD: Because I had earned a MFA in creative writing, I had experience working with a mentor. Kelly [J. Baptist] was a terrific critique partner and could also act as a sensitivity reader for my manuscript. She had insightful comments, suggested books I should read, and asked several times if I wanted her to provide even more information.



Kristin Bartley Lenz
KBL: What a wonderful experience! Leslie Connor was my mentor, and she was so friendly and encouraging. The mentorship program has some guidelines, but it’s very flexible, and we set up a routine for critiquing/revising that worked for our schedules. This mentorship came at a difficult time in my writing career. I already had one published novel, but I had recently lost my agent who’d been unable to sell my next novel. Not only did Leslie help with revising my manuscript, but we also talked about school visits and speaking/teaching opportunities, and she was there to cheer me on when I began querying for a new agent. She was open about her own challenges too and gave me a glimpse into the life of a multi-published author, including the ups and downs.


3. How did the mentorship impact/affect your writing/career?

JD: Working with Kelly gave me more faith in my story involving a friendship between a white boy and an African American boy living on a cotton farm. Their families are share cropping. My agent loves my story, but so far no editor has snatched it up.


KBL: My writing career has been bumpy, and I’m still in touch with Leslie who’s been so supportive. I’ll fast-forward to today. I have a new agent and a new publishing contract! The Door Swings Open, my YA novel that won the mentorship competition way back in 2018-19 will finally be published in March 2026.


4. Is there any advice or encouragement you would offer to people applying?

JD: Put your work out there and see what happens. Even if you do not win the mentorship, you can always try again. Plus each time you polish a piece before submitting it, the manuscript sparkles even more.



KBL: Submit your best work that you love and be patient. If you don’t win, you’ll still receive valuable feedback and encouragement from the judges. If you do win, you’ll be spending many months working on your manuscript with no promise of publication, but you’ll grow as a writer and expand your community.



Looking for more information about the mentorship program to help you decide whether to apply? Here's some recent posts on the Mitten that may help: 
Mentorship coordinator Jessica Zimmerman explains the program and what you will receive (even if you don't win) 
Learn more about 2026 mentor Sheela Chari 
2018-2019 mentee Danielle DeFauw gives more reasons to apply
Remember, spots are limited and registration opens January 2. Good luck!
Questions? Email Jessica at scbwi.mi.mentorship@gmail.com

Friday, October 17, 2025

Hugs and Hurrahs

                            

It's time to celebrate our MichKids friends and colleagues! Welcome to this quarter's edition of Hugs and Hurrahs!




Jessica Dazzo is celebrating self-publising her book Berries for Bruno!

We're celebrating with you, Jessica!




Lisa Wheeler is pleased to announce Nobody Notices Ghost, a humorous book about a lonely ghost, sold to Random House Studios. A Fall 2028 release is expected and the illustrator will be Christopher Thornock.  

Way to go, Lisa!





On September 13th, Carrie Pearson celebrated the launch of her latest authored book, Watch Them Grow: The Fascinating Science of Animal Beginnings, with Marquette-based library and bookstore partners. Watch Them Grow is a Junior Library Guild Gold selection and recently received a strong review from School Library Journal, which clearly 'got' the intention of the book: "VERDICT A great introduction to the science of reproduction in a way that makes animal babies the star of the show."

Well done, Carrie!




Christina Fecher is excited to share the news that her manuscript that she began when her daughter was 5 years old will be released as her debut children's book in the spring of 2026! Her daughter turned 16 last month! She's not ready to reveal the plot or title, only that that it's about Santa in the offseason. 

Congratulations, Christina!







Kristin Bartley Lenz's 2016 YA novelThe Art of Holding On and Letting Go, will be re-released in February 2026 as a 10th Anniversary Edition. Here's the eye-catching, newly re-imagined cover!




Wild Ink Publishing also revealed the cover for her new YA novel, The Door Swings Open, forthcoming in March 2026.

Congratulations times two, Kristin!



Congratulations again to all of you! Please send all your good news to Alison Hodgson at aewhodgson@gmail.com for the next Hugs and Hurrahs post. 


Friday, September 26, 2025

Writer Spotlight: Kristin Bartley Lenz

 If I Could Fly, cover reveal, pantsing, 15 words, Social Work, and wayward titles: Author Kristin Bartley Lenz

Charlie Barshaw coordinates our regular Writer Spotlight feature and interviews writers of SCBWI-MI. In this piece, meet author and former editor of The Mitten, Kristin Bartley Lenz.

When did young Kristin know she wanted to write? When did she find that helping others was something she needed to do?


My second-grade teacher made us write a poem for a Young Author’s Contest. Even though I loved to read, writing a poem seemed impossible. I complained and procrastinated. 

Finally, I stood at the back window of my house looking out at the woods, and inspiration struck. My poem, If I Could Fly, won the contest. I was asked to read my poem in front of the whole school (somehow I didn’t have stage-fright then!), and I attended a young author’s conference where I met real life authors. 

From that point on, I wanted to write. But it took more than 30 years for me to win another writing contest!

Even though I wrote throughout my childhood, I lost confidence in my writing during my teen and college years, and explored other areas of interest, earning a BA in psychology and then an MSW

Social work was a detour on my writing path, but it greatly expanded my worldview and ultimately prepared me to return to writing years later with more confidence and a stronger voice. 

Both writing and social work have given me a way to contribute to making our world a better place. I worked at a runaway shelter and counseling center in Michigan, a community mental health clinic and schools in Georgia, a program for children with developmental disabilities in California, and a children's hospital/home-visiting program back in Detroit.

(From your website) My novel is currently out of stock, but we're working on a reprint/updated version, hopefully to be released in 2026!

Wow! Good news and bad news? The good news being that you sold through the first press run. The bad news being that the second print won’t be available for a year. What’s your attitude?

My first YA novel, The Art of Holding On and Letting Go, is not just out of stock, but out of print because the publisher closed just before we could do a third print run. My attitude was bummed because Elephant Rock Books was such a great, award-winning small press. Rights reverted to me, and now Wild Ink Publishing will be re-releasing the novel, along with my new novel, The Door Swings Open, in spring 2026.

You hustle to get your work published, entering contests, writing poetry and flash fiction and prose poems and short stories and YA novels. And you’ve succeeded in building and diversifying your body of work. Is it another full-time job to query and submit your work? How many rejections?

Ha, yes, querying takes a lot of time and it’s a very effective way to procrastinate during the long slog of a novel draft! I haven’t kept track of the number of rejections, but it’s painful to look at the sea of red on my Submittable account which goes back to 2011. 

I like entering contests because they give me a deadline and challenge me to try a prompt/theme or meet specific word counts. My writing has evolved into new directions over the years, and I’ve been fortunate to learn from many wonderful teachers who encouraged experimenting with new forms. 

I write poetry and short fiction when I’m in between novel drafts or stuck. It’s fun to play with them over time. Most aren’t publishable, but every now and then I’m happy with the result, and I’ll research publishers who might be a good fit.

You write freelance for Detroit-area non-profits. Who do you write for, and why?

Over ten years ago, I was looking for ways to blend writing into my social work career, and Gleaners Community Food Bank of Southeastern Michigan gave me my first freelance job. 

They have a strong marketing and communications department, but they hire freelance writers when they’re short-staffed or have a big project with tight deadlines. This is collaborative writing which is different from my own individual work. 

The initial idea/direction comes from the Gleaners team, and then my words get blended with their words/formatting, and I enjoy seeing how it ultimately turns out in print.

Rock-climbing Kristin

My favorite assignments are for their Harvest Magazine. One time, they sent me to a senior apartment complex in Detroit that hosted a monthly fresh food distribution. I interviewed and photographed residents and volunteers to share their stories and Gleaner’s impact. 

I will always remember the elderly grandmother who cherished a fresh grapefruit, cutting it in quarters to make it stretch for days. She sat with me and detailed her monthly budget, including rent, utilities, medicines, and the paltry $16 of monthly government food assistance. It was impossible for her to make ends meet and why programs like Gleaners are crucial.

Most recently I’ve volunteered to do grant writing for Making Spirits Bright, a Detroit area literacy nonprofit that provides free school book fairs and more. They always need donations of gently used books, and they have a variety of volunteer needs! Check it out: https://makingspiritsbright.org/volunteer/

You co-founded The Mitten Blog, and worked as editor-in-chief for seven years, which is where I had the pleasure to work with you. Who else founded the blog? What was the original vision? How was The Mitten different when you started it versus when you left?

Jodie Fletcher and I were co-editors way back when The Mitten was a quarterly newsletter, first in print and then digital. Blogs were becoming popular and a way that we could share content more frequently, while giving our members more opportunities to contribute and promote their online visibility. Jodie set up our initial blog format, but then she was ready to explore other projects beyond children’s writing.

Patti Richards and Nina Goebel joined me on the original blog team, and it seems like only a few years ago that we gathered at a coffee shop to brainstorm. Patti has since published numerous picture books, and Nina is working as a licensed counselor/art therapist. 

Henry wants Kristin to take a break

I enjoyed the weekly rhythm of the blog posts/planning and how it kept me connected to our chapter’s leadership and members. Volunteering is a great way to meet people in a large organization, and I loved that my job gave me a way to champion our members’ work and success stories. 

It was hard to let go of my role, but it was time to shift my energy in other directions and I knew the blog would benefit from fresh eyes. It’s been fun to see the new team grow into their roles and make it their own, keeping some of our traditions and starting new ones. 

Thank you for your long run, Charlie! Your in-depth interviews foster connections and build community throughout our chapter. 

Congratulations on your second novel, The Door Swings Open, forthcoming in March 2026 from Wild Ink Publishing. You describe it as a genre-bender with mystery, suspense, and magical realism. Was there a bit of the “Sophomore Jinx” playing through your head at times? Like, maybe one novel is all I get?

Oh my goodness, yes. It took ten years to get my debut novel published, and I never thought it’d be another ten years before the next one came out! 

Three different agents believed in this novel and took it on at various stages of revision. We had some close calls and some bad luck (like going out on submission just as Covid hit New York), but we finally found the right fit with a small press.

Here's the teaser for your new novel:

THE DOOR SWINGS OPEN

Ella’s missing. Without a trace. A runaway.
Charlotte’s searching. For her missing friend. For help for her veteran father.
Aiden’s running. From his brother. From his past.

Tarot cards, urban art, lunar energy, fireflies, thin places.

A girl trying to reinvent herself.
A girl trying to find herself.
A boy trying to right his wrongs.

One will escape.
One will get caught.
One will die.

Did you slowly “pants” this one? How did your writing process evolve from your first novel to the second?

I’m definitely a pantser, but it was the many revisions that took so long. The story grew from a straight-forward first-person narration/simplistic plot to its current genre-bending form with multiple perspectives, a non-linear timeline, and elements of magical realism. 

Along the way, I was fortunate to win the SCBWI-MI novel mentorship competition with Leslie Connor. I’m so appreciative of her support and encouragement (and SCBWI-MI for providing these opportunities!)

Florida Writers blog shows your short poem “Flying,” about a young girl learning to ride a bike. You were able to take the heart of that poem and submit it to the NY Times, where it was published and honored.

How conscientious are you in recycling and repurposing your words?

Thanks to SCBWI-MI member Shutta Crum for recognizing the lesson in my poem and writing about it for the Florida Writer’s Association (where she spends the winters). 


I tinker with my words endlessly, and the work often evolves in unexpected ways over time. I can only think of one other instance where I deliberately recycled/repurposed my words for publication – a poem turned into a short story and both were published in different anthologies. 

I never intended to publish the first version of Flying. I wrote it as my own personal reflection on my daughter’s upcoming high school graduation. 

Years later, when I saw the call for submissions from The New York Times, I misread the instructions. I thought they asked for short poems on the theme of renewal with a maximum of 15 lines. I thought I could cut a few sentences from Flying

Then I realized the directions said it could only be 15 words! I cut the poem to the bone, and it worked! You can read more about the process, and how Shutta turned this into a writing exercise with other examples here: https://floridawriters.blog/hidden-treasures-finding-poems-within-your-poems/

You’ve been an active SCBWI member for at least fifteen years. Many friends and colleagues have helped you in your career: Heather Meloche, Natalie Aguirre and Deb Gonzales, to name a few. Want to name a few more?

I couldn’t have kept going without the support and camaraderie of so many writer friends from SCBWI and beyond. Critique partners, accountability partners, nature trail walking partners… There are too many to name, some have moved on to other states and career paths, and I will surely forget someone if I try to name them all! 

But I’ll give a special shout out to Tracy Bilen because she approached me at a conference over ten years ago, we became critique partners, and we’ve been cheering each other on ever since.

You’ve done tons of workshops and presentations, but the ones that surprised me were creative writing sessions aimed at social workers. That’s your personal Venn diagram, but it must be for others, too? What kind of audience do you get when you ask social workers to write?

I even have an SCBWI-MI member to thank for pointing me in this direction! Years ago, Betsy McKee told me about the University of Iowa National Poetry Contest for Social Workers. I entered, placed 2nd, and was given a scholarship to attend their annual Writing Workshop for Social Workers. 

So many people have personal stories they want to write – often for their own healing and/or to help others. My workshops introduce social workers/counselors to therapeutic writing for their own self-care and to benefit their clients. We delve into journaling, poetry, short stories, and memoir, depending on the group’s interest. 

Many people write in secret, and my goal is to provide a safe, supportive place to be vulnerable and receive encouragement and validation. I wish I knew years ago that poetry therapy even existed! I’m not planning to return to school to become a certified poetry therapist, but I’ve taken workshops to further my skills, and I benefit personally from the sessions too.

How do you, as a writer, take the experience you’ve gained over the years and various jobs as a social worker, while maintaining privacy for your clients?

The Just YA anthology included one of Kristin's short stories.
Free online access at 
https://open.library.okstate.edu/justya/

That’s a really good question that I’ve thought about a lot. Confidentiality is paramount. Their stories are important, but not mine to tell. 

I think it comes back to resilience. That’s what I’m tapping into when I write. Not the actual details of my clients’ circumstances, but the resilience that keeps them going, keeps them hopeful and seeking light and love. Individual resilience as well as resilience in families and communities. 

And then this all gets mixed up with my own values and personal experiences, so in the end it’s a new creation yet universal and relatable. The Art of Holding On and Letting Go grew out of my own rock-climbing experience, but readers have remarked that my social worker empathy is infused throughout the story.

You’ve praised editor Jotham Burrello for his help with The Art of Holding On and Letting Go. What did you learn working with him?

Jotham was the founder of Elephant Rock Books, but he’s also a college professor, the director of the Yale Summer Writing Program, and a published novelist. I had already revised The Art of the Holding On and Letting Go countless times on my own, with my first agent, and through the Highlights Foundation Whole Novel Workshop. 

But working with Jotham, the story grew deeper and richer. He asked me to step away from my computer and journal by hand, to write a scene of a seminal moment for each character. I was initially resistant – after all the revising I’d already done, now I wanted to be on my computer making final changes in the actual manuscript. 

I didn’t want to write scenes that wouldn’t be included in the final book. But I gave it a try, and it led to important discoveries about my characters. The scenes didn’t make it into the book, but many details did – so many layers.

And now I’m working with a new editor at Wild Ink on my next novel and just received a 12-page editorial letter with such thorough, thoughtful feedback. 

Small publishers can’t compete with the big NY publishers in many ways, but I’ve been fortunate to receive such personal attention and care from editors at small presses.

 

Thank you card from a high school student after Kristin's school visit

Titles, they’re a bugaboo of mine. What does it take to come up with your titles?

I never have a good title to start. The Art of Holding On and Letting Go was initially titled Climber Girl and then Carabiner, and my first agent said we needed something better before we went out on submission. 

We brainstormed and then scanned the entire manuscript looking for a word or phrase, and I found it on page 232! I love that the title describes the physical action of climbing and my character’s emotional journey.

The title evolved similarly for my forthcoming novel, The Door Swings Open. My drafts were titled Runaway. But in a revised scene, a door swung open, literally, and then that grew into a theme for each of the main characters.

What’s next for Kristin?

Wild Ink Publishing just did the cover reveal for my new novel, so it’s starting to feel real! Look for The Door Swings Open next spring, as well as the updated reprint of The Art of Holding On and Letting Go

I need to revamp my website and plan events. My current work-in-progress surprised me by turning from YA to adult, and I’ll be plugging away at my slow pace. 

It might take ten years to publish that one too (!), but in the meantime, I’ll keep writing poetry and short stories and teaching workshops and taking nature walks and cheering others on.

Please share any social media platforms:

I’ve stepped away from regular posting/sharing on social media, but I still pop in and out every week to keep in touch.

 https://www.facebook.com/kristinbartleylenz

https://www.instagram.com/kristinbartleylenz/

Website: www.kristinbartleylenz.com

 

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 Reminders about Upcoming SCBWI-MI Events


  • TOMORROW (Saturday)! Little Free Library Day hosted by SCBWI-MI's E&I Team- September 27th
  • OPEN UNTIL TUESDAY! SCBWI-MI 2025 Critique Carousel- RegistrationSept.18th-30th
  • DUE WEDNESDAY! SCBWI-MI's BIPOC ScholarshipSept.1st-Oct. 1st
  • Fall webinar with Sheela ChariOct. 22nd at 7:00 pm Registration period: Oct 1-22
  • Fall webinar with Cate Berry- Nov. 12th at 7:00 pm Registration period: Oct 22-Nov 12

Friday, December 13, 2024

Memories of Mackinac Island

Beautiful spaces, 2011 or 2014?, medicinal fudge, wet bike rides, Arthur Levine, plein air painting, and butterflies: the SCBWI-MI 2014 Mackinac Island conference

Compiled by Charlie Barshaw

Disclaimer:  There were two SCBWI-MI conferences--2011 and 2014--as well as a number of Michigan Reading Association conferences around the same time. So we're going with Mackinac Memories. It may not have happened in 2014, but it happened on Mackinac Island. Thanks to everyone who contributed. 

First memory begins here:

I blame the Mackinac Island conference for my addiction to writing in beautiful spaces. Until then I had been content to labor away in my office or the dining room table at home. Now, I look for every opportunity to write in places wooded and wondrous.

The Mackinac Island Bridge
photo courtesy of Ann Finkelstein

My favorite thing about writing conferences is the community. Getting to chat with other people who love stories the way that I do is a rare treat. Being on Mackinac with that particular group of writers was incredible. Time just slows down on Mackinac. I loved going on walks with other writers, strolling along the shore, down the streets through town, and feeling like we were outside of time. That this space was sacred and we could write and share and never run out of time.

Since that conference, my writing life has really taken off! My debut book, Hanging with My Peeps, was published in 2016. I met the editor for my second book, Junkyard Dogs (Peachtree Teen, 2023), at a MI SCBWI conference. Junkyard Dogs has been a huge success for me--with the audio book being narrated by Robbie Daymond! and the story making the shortlist for the Indiana Author Awards (since I work in Indiana). 

One really cool thing that's happened: As a teen I used my babysitting money to pay for a subscription to Writer's Digest, which I read cover to cover. Just last month, I was asked to write an article for them! What a full circle moment!


I don't think I did a presentation then. I was really new to the group. I think I just attended as a participant. And, yes...it was glorious!
--Deb Gonzalez


Boats and dock
Photo courtesy of Vicky Lorencen

I remember being overwhelmed by all the talented people around me, and surprised by everyone’s kindness! Most meaningful of all was a wonderful walk and talk time that Heidi Sheffield and I shared. She is such a wonderful person!
--Elizabeth McBride

I recently remembered that at that Mackinac Island SCBWI conference I had a fabulous critique by Candace Fleming. I remember she told me that manuscript would definitely one day be a book. And finally two years ago it was published. My Christmas book.
--Lindsey McDivitt


My 2014 conference memories are muddled - nothing stands out! Was I even there, lol! Strangely, I remember the Mackinac conference before that more clearly, not even sure when that was (2010?) when I roomed with Terry Lynn Johnson from Canada and she entertained us with her funny adventure stories.
--Kristin Lenz


Scenic view
courtesy Ann Finkelstein

You've asked me to take a trek down memory lane, and to the 2014 lane to be exact. I'm flattered that you think I might have a good memory. Haha.
At my age, my memory kinda goes in and out, so I'm not sure what I can dredge up from the 2014 conference.

So, I went to THE MITTEN blog and to 2014 and found a treasure trove of pictures and summaries from shadows and others who were in attendance.

September/October might have had lead-in articles, but the Nov blog has a lot of pictures. (See posts HERE, HERE, and HERE.)

Sorry that I can't offer more to you. I, seriously, remember being there and working hard. I didn't sightsee, or take a carriage ride. Didn't even get to buy fudge.
--Rachel Anderson

plein air in the butterfly house



What I remember most is the 1st Mackinac Island Conference with Donna Jo Napoli, Beverly Horowitz and Tamra Tuller.

Couple memories from that conference (even though you didn't ask.) Donna Jo's dinner speech was a hoot. She had us all in stitches. It had something to do with starting out in the field and making all the mistakes when it came to submission.

Sunday afternoon after the conference ended Donna Jo, her husband Barry (?), Kristin Nitz and I took a walk around the island - through the interior if I remember correctly. Somehow we ended up near the Grand Hotel and snuck in through a side door. It wasn't as grand as expected but somewhat shabby - at least the part we saw. (Maybe that's where the help stayed and not the public part?)
--Pat Trattles

Arthur and Heidi
courtesy Heidi Sheffield

The Mackinaw Conference was one of my most cherished SCBWI-Michigan conferences of all time. I think my favorite remembrance was buying a raffle ticket and getting the prize of a manuscript critique and phone conversation with Arthur Levine. I was SOOOO EXCITED!!!! At the time, ICE CREAM FACE was unpublished, so Arthur took a look at the manuscript and we discussed it on the phone. 

Later that year, I was in NYC for the SCBWI Winter Conference and visited Scholastic with a group of illustrators. We got to see “the great wall,” (I think that was the name) a place they would pin favorite illustrator postcards. I couldn’t believe one of mine was there and was practically tearing up. :)) I had brought a mockup of ICF with me and gave it to Arthur, who ultimately passed on it, but he gave me some feedback that helped me refine it that much more. 
Heidi and Ruth


At the LA conference in 2017, Nancy Paulsen from Penguin/Random House saw it and offered a contract the next week to buy ICE CREAM FACE, which is now a Dolly Parton Imagination Library Book. I encourage members to keep their minds and hearts open to the revision process, going to conferences when possible and meeting folks like Arthur and Nancy. When preparation meets opportunity, it is a beautiful thing.
--Heidi Sheffield



From the best of my recollection, Dana Atnip, Kara Marsee, Nina Goebel and I drove up to the docks in my show van I used to sell my books, often referred to as the Book Mobile. After getting to the island Dana, Nina, and I got an extra roommate to share with, and that was Beth Rayner

We shoved all our gear into that room for the SCBWI conference, which was a hoot and a half! Four women and one bathroom! I remember Dana and I renting bikes to take an island round trip ride and headed back up for more conference doings after buying fudge in town. The fudge was for medicinal purposes only, 

I was slated to speak at the conference on self-publishing, a new venture and turn for SCBWI. I remember being extremely nervous but with the help of friends and fudge I was able to deliver. I was happy to meet some great authors and illustrators, some whom I've kept in touch with since then, such as Doris Holik Kelly.

I have been to Mackinac Island before and recently as last summer, 2023 to do research for my book. It's truly a magical place especially off the beaten or paved path. 
photo courtesy Heidi Sheffield


I remember that the trip went by far too quickly, but I did sneak time in to get down to the Mission Point shore to observe and sketch a mother beaver and her clan working on their lodge. This was all that stayed in my mind from that trip. The industrious beaver family and the overcrowded room. 

Sadly, last summer at the island the beaver lodge had been torn down and the family not seen. Some say that they are secretly housed safely up further on the eastern side of the island, I should go back again to look for them! 

Yes, all in all, a great conference with great connections and would love to rejoin the SCBWI gang to return to the island for another conference.
--Lori Taylor

Plein air and visitor
courtesy Ann Finkelstein

What do you remember about the trip to Mackinac Island 2014, and/or the return trip home?

Arthur Levine who was with Scholastic… (the publisher of the Harry Potter Series) was visiting some friends in Saugatuck and wanted to get to the conference (as a speaker) a day early. Anita called from her up north cottage and asked if I could drive him up to the island. I explained that Saugatuck is not a close drive for me and I would not be going up for another day. Anita is so personable and nice that you just can’t say no to her, so I came up with an alternate plan. I said, “If you can get him to my driveway, I will meet someone halfway.”

Arthur’s friends dropped him in my driveway. He commented on how much yard I had and how uncluttered and organized everything was. I imagined that in a New York City apartment things are a bit more cramped. I drove him up in my 350Z to make it fun. We had interesting conversations. He said my books exceeded the national average but would never publish them as they had already been published.

That halfway person was the wonderful & good friend Jay Whistler, whom I didn’t yet know at the time. He bought us lunch before she drove him the rest of the way.

Had you been to Mackinac Island before? What was your initial impression?

It is a magical place. Yes, I have been there many times. On this trip the sky broke loose and it poured. Water was gushing out of the eaves. Christine Grabiel & Linda Barley rode bikes from Linda’s cottage on the other side of the island. They were soaked to the skin however, they were still all smiles and laughter.

Any of the presenters or presentations leave an indelible mark on you?

I think I spoke with three others on indie publishing. Sandy Carlson, Julie Hedlund & (sorry I can’t recall the 3rd one maybe Lori Taylor?). I only had 10 minutes to speak and wanted to get a lot in and thus probably spoke way too fast. I was impressed that RA’s Carrie and Leslie sat in on the session.
Anita and me
courtesy Anita Pazner

Ha! I remember that you and Anita dressed up in 18th century garb.

Did you get a chance to sightsee? What did you seek out? What did you stumble upon?

My wife also came to this one. We didn’t do too much walking around due to the rain.

Any interactions with faculty or fellow attendees that stood out?

I recall Kirbi showing me her amazing artwork portfolio. I was very impressed.

I felt like I knew Arthur pretty well after the long car ride. We talked shop nonstop. He had many questions about indie publishing.

What do you remember about the ferries? The horse-drawn wagons? The bicycles?

Having been there before I don’t recall. I think we may have ridden a bike around the island on a dry day.
--Dave Stricklen

In the butterfly garden
courtesy Anita Pazner
What do you remember about the trip to Mackinac Island 2014, and/or the return trip home?


I live in Marquette in the UP, so I drove south to the ferry marina. I remember thinking that most of the attendees from Michigan would be driving north to get to the same location. And lucky me, I got to experience three of five Great Lakes in one day: Superior, Michigan, and Huron. The ferry boat is the coolest (literally) transport method! You can see for miles across pristine freshwater oceans, and as Mackinac Island approaches, slowly leave behind the normal hustle and bustle of cars and trucks and enter the beguiling magic of a simpler time.

Had you been to Mackinac Island before? What was your initial impression?

I had been to Mackinac Island as an enthralled child (biking! horseback riding! fudge eating!), a moody early teen (“can we go now?”), and finally as a woman in her late twenties vacationing with her long-term boyfriend. I left that trip engaged!

Any of the presenters or presentations leave an indelible mark on you?

They were all fantastic. So giving and authentic. I believe they all loved leaving their real lives behind for a few days and sharing what they knew with attendees. 

Arthur Levine floored me with his description of editing the Harry Potter series for the US market. Greatness in our midst! Then, he floored me again in our one-on-one critique of my middle-grade novel manuscript. I had a big inferiority chip going into it (did I mention he was the US Harry Potter editor?), but he nudged me out of that unhelpful mindset and treated me respectfully. The gems he gifted that day are still part of my writer toolbox.

Eric Rohmann, Anita, Candy Fleming and me
courtesy Anita Pazner

Did you get a chance to sightsee? What did you seek out? What did you stumble upon?


We were too busy with the conference to do much sightseeing, but one delightful memory involved Arthur again. As we walked to dinner on Thursday night with faculty and volunteers before the conference started, he sang show tunes a capella. He had a great voice, but his enthusiasm was unparalleled.

Any interactions with faculty or fellow attendees that stood out?
Anita and Heidi
courtesy Anita Pazner



Conference coordinators Charlie Barshaw and Anita Pazner thought of all the details that would make the weekend special, organized, and memorable. They were effective, funny sidekicks who modeled partnership at its best.




What was your biggest surprise?

I was surprised that so many people made the effort to drive, ferry, horse taxi, and walk to be together and learn. Our community of bookmakers is truly remarkable.

Thanks for the trip down memory lane, Charlie!
--Carrie Pearson


I’m afraid I am mixing up the two events we had on the island. One with me and Monica as RAs and one with me and Carrie.

What do you remember about the trip to Mackinac Island 2014, and/or the return trip home?

I remember we got a late request from Arthur to pick him up a day earlier than we had planned. The planners were already near the straights. We ended up contacting Sue Thoms and Dave Stricklen and Jay Whistler, who coordinated picking him up and driving him north. Ask Jay about this, her memory is probably better.

Had you been to Mackinac Island before? What was your initial impression?

I had been there a few times. Always magical
Leslie, Arthur Levine, and Christy Ottaviano
courtesy Anita Pazner

Any of the presenters or presentations leave an indelible mark on you?

Donna Jo Napoli—a class act. Not about her work, which I love, but about her manner and capacity for sharing with attendees.

Did you get a chance to sightsee? What did you seek out? What did you stumble upon?

Several of us rented bikes and rode around the island. We visited the library and sat on the back deck with books, visited the school and walked up and around the Grand Hotel grounds.

What was your biggest surprise?

I remember the tulips and getting everyone to hold up their arms to invoke good weather
Leslie plein air-ing
photo by Anita Pazner

--Leslie Helakoski


What do you remember about the trip to Mackinac Island 2014, and/or the return trip home?

I enjoyed spending time with the illustrators in the butterfly house.

Had you been to Mackinac Island before? What was your initial impression?

I had been to Mackinac Island before, but I hadn’t stayed at the Mission Point Resort.

Any interactions with faculty or fellow attendees that stood out?

I remember talking to Sandy Carlson, PJ Lyons, Lori Eslick and Heather Shumaker.

What do you remember about the ferries? The horse-drawn wagons? The bicycles?

I remember the gardens were gorgeous.
--Ann Finkelstein

What do you remember about the trip to Mackinac Island 2014, and/or the return trip home?

When I attended this conference, it was my first at Mackinac. I was fortunate enough to be invited to a friend’s cabin for the night before the conference so that I wouldn’t have to drive so far. 

While there, a bit of a situation arose: presenter Arthur Levine’s transportation fell through. The RAs and conference organizers were having a tough time finding someone so last minute, especially because he needed to be picked up in South Haven (or maybe Saugatuck). Wherever we had to collect him, there didn’t seem to be anyone in that area attending the conference the next day to bring him along. 

plein air painting
courtesy of Anita Pazner

Instead, we cobbled together a solution. Dave Stricklen would drive from Grand Rapids to pick him up, and then I would meet them halfway to Mackinac (near Big Rapids). This meant I had to drive 1.5 hours south of the cabin, meet Dave and Arthur, drive north to St. Ignace for three hours, take the ferry across, and get Arthur to Mission Point in time for the Friday night opening activities. All this after having driven four hours the day before to get to my friend’s cabin.

Needless to say, I was wiped out, so I don’t remember much about the conversations Arthur and I shared on the drive. I do remember asking him some specific questions about publishing in general, and he was gracious enough to share his thoughts. At one point, he said, “Tell me about your current WIP.” I almost drove off the road…maybe. I don’t recall. I was very tired. But it seems likely, doesn’t it? THE Arthur Levine wanting to chat about my work? He offered some great advice that helped me with some sticky spots in the plot. I will always be grateful for that.

When I told my husband about all this when I got home, he said, “Isn’t that nice,” and I could practically feel him wanting to pat me on the head. So I explained who Levine is and how huge a deal this whole thing was, and that it would be like a non-writer being asked to chauffeur Tom Hanks somewhere. My husband finally understood and honestly got happy for me.

Had you been to Mackinac Island before? What was your initial impression?

Lori Eslick
plein air leader
courtesy of Anita Pazner
I had been to Mackinac about six years earlier, when my husband and I took our daughters there while on vacation. Though we only spent the day, I remember walking through the streets and marveling at how lovely the gardens were. It seemed the neighbors competed to win “Most Beautiful,” but I don’t know how anyone would be able to choose. I also thought it was remarkable because all the flowers were annuals, which they probably couldn’t plant until June, and yet here they were, in the middle of July, a glorious riot of a rainbow.

Any of the presenters or presentations leave an indelible mark on you?

I’ll be honest that I don’t remember much about the presentations. That was partly because I had volunteered to run the conference bookstore, and there was a huge issue with the spreadsheet, messing up all the calculations. I spent a large portion of the conference trying to fix the issue, and eventually had to do things by hand. That meant I wasn’t able to attend as many sessions as I would have liked. It was also the last time I did the bookstore. To those of you who do it now, there is a special place in heaven for you.

Did you get a chance to sightsee? What did you seek out? What did you stumble upon?
Photo courtesy Ed Spicer

I did not sightsee, which I was sad about. I had hoped to spend some quality time along the water, but the bookstore debacle commanded all my free time.

Any interactions with faculty or fellow attendees that stood out?

Several people stepped in to keep the bookstore moving while I dealt with the technical issues. Jennifer Rumberger and Dave Stricklen were especially helpful, and Cynthia Mathes, an SCBWI member from Louisiana, offered her support by running to the local bookstore to pick up some speaker books that hadn’t been delivered. I would never have been able to manage without their help. If there is anyone else who helped out and I have forgotten, please accept my apologies, but know that I am truly grateful for all the support.

What do you remember about the ferries? The horse-drawn wagons? The bicycles?

I love a good ferry ride, unless it’s the kind where I am stuck in my car the whole time. Then I freak out that the ferry will capsize and my car will become a coffin. This is what happens when you have anxiety. ;) Thankfully, the weather over was nice, just a bit chilly, but not too cold. Arthur wanted to sit on the upper deck to enjoy the view of the Mackinac Bridge and the fall air. He seemed to be basking in the moment.

more plein air
courtesy Anita Pazner

He also commented on the buggies and bikes and was fascinated by an entire island with no motorized transport. He asked questions about when this happened, why they decided to do this, how people traveled in the winter, etc. I realized that, despite being a nearly life-long Michigan resident, I didn’t know the answers to these questions. So I looked it up to be able to share it with Arthur. (In case someone needs that history, here’s a link to it.)

What was your biggest surprise?

My biggest surprise was probably the bat I would see every morning and evening in a back hallway as I walked to breakfast and back to my room at night. To be clear, the bat was outside, so I was safe, but I loved being able to watch it through the window. Sometimes it spread its wings to stretch (perhaps between naps?), other times it didn’t move at all. But he was my little companion for the entire conference. And it seemed like the perfect time of year to spend a few days with him.

What's happened to you over the past 10 years?

Since that conference, although Arthur helped me see through a sticky plot issue, I've put that novel on a shelf. Actually, I've put that novel in the trash. I can hear the collective gasp right now. But it was the right move. What I realized that it wasn't just the plot that was stuck. It was me. (All the Swifties now have the lyrics to "Anti-Hero" running through their brains.) Although I spent years on it, I got what I needed out of it. When I started, it was the novel of my heart. As the years went by, it became the albatross on my back. (I may be mixing metaphors here, but you get what I mean.) And while it will never see the light of day, it is the novel that taught me how to write.

It was also holding me back because it showed me that I had gone as far as I could on my own. I no longer knew what I didn't know. I needed a different approach. As soon as I deleted all my files, shredded all my pages, and let it go emotionally, my writing path changed in a big way. 

butterfly and flower
courtesy Anita Pazner

First, I went back to graduate school and got my MFA in creative writing from Vermont College of Fine Arts. After graduation, I started my own editing business, helping other authors develop their manuscripts and their skills. I have spoken at conferences here in Michigan, around the country, and internationally. 

I became a submissions reader for three different literary agencies and two literary journals. I've judged multiple writing competitions. But even more importantly, I am now a published author with two MG titles, one short story, and a second soon-to-be-published short story coming out. I'm currently working on another MG, this time historical.

Deleting an entire manuscript was a scary step, but it was what I needed to move forward. And though it may seem trite or hyperbolic, it's fair to say that Mackinac was the tipping point, so I took a leap and changed my life.
--Jay Whistler


Had you been to Mackinac Island before? What was your initial impression? 

Yes. We’d been there a few times. Loved the facility we were at. Perfect!

Any of the presenters or presentations leave an indelible mark on you? 

Yes. But for some reason I can’t remember her name. She had me in tears at one point, I remember. She kinda wore old hippie clothing. And I had read her most famous book. God! My memory is slipping . . . who were the presenters at that conf.? Tell me, and I can pick her out.

Did you get a chance to sightsee? What did you seek out? What did you stumble upon? 

Yes. Went for walks. Always loved going up over the hill and through the woods. Past the cemetery.

Any interactions with faculty or fellow attendees that stood out? 
Heidi 
courtesy Heidi Sheffield


Got to know Heidi a bit more. But always, loved seeing folks.

What’s writing life been like for you these past ten years? 

(What! You want a treatise? It’s always been full of ups and downs. I have a new agent now, after 21 years with my old one. I’ve immersed myself in writing a lot of poetry as I wait to hear about book manuscripts. And after about 10 years just submitted a new novel manuscript to my agent. We’ll see if it sells. Still loving the process, even without any major sales lately.)
--Shutta Crum

To close out the Mackinac Memories, prolific author and esteemed faculty member, Candace Fleming:

What do you remember about the trip to Mackinac Island 2014, and/or the return trip home?

The moment I remember most was when one of the participants sang OH, NO to me in the lobby.  He used the book’s text and put it to the tune of “Froggy Went A-Courtin’.”  Then other attendees chimed in, and suddenly I was being serenaded with my own words.  How amazing!

Had you been to Mackinac Island before? What was your initial impression?

I’d been to the island before, so I was excited to return.  I remember being charmed by the hotel… and the fudge.

Any of the presenters or presentations leave an indelible mark on you?

Christy Ottaviano’s talk resonated with me.  Her words inspired me to be a better writer.  Arthur, I remember, made me laugh.  And I met Jodell Sadler there… the beginning of a friendship that continues to this day.

Did you get a chance to sightsee? What did you seek out? What did you stumble upon?

It was rainy so I don’t think I did a ton of sightseeing.  I did eat a lot of fudge.  Yup, I know.  I’ve mentioned that already, but let’s face it, the fudge is memorable.  I love that little knife that comes with one’s brick of chocolate.

What do you remember about the ferries? The horse-drawn wagons? The bicycles?

It was wet going home on the ferry.  I didn’t ride in the horse-drawn wagons.  I did, however, take a ride around the island when I first arrived.  It’s such a beautiful place, and so different from one end to the other.   

What was your biggest surprise?

Ruth plein air painting
courtesy Anita Pazner

I was delighted by the conferees – smart, kind, hard-working.  I wished I’d lived closer so I could make them all my best friends.  Honestly, I remember it being one of the coziest, companionable conferences I’d ever attended.  And I met you and Ruth there!!

--Candace Fleming

 


Charlie Barshaw conducts interviews for The Mitten. He co-chaired conferences in 2013 and 2014. He is fortunate to know so many talented and giving creators in the Children's Literature community.