Friday, June 28, 2024
New changes hope to supercharge our SCBWI-MI shop talk format:
My previous years of volunteering has made me well aware of how much thought goes into creating valuable shoptalk content month after month. I recently sent out a survey to the coordinators. I wanted to get a feel for where we are now, where we are headed and what could be helpful. These two changes were born out of the responses that I received.
The first idea was for each of our six shop talks to provide us with one regional zoom each year. We will do this on even months. (now presentations for half the year are covered).
The second idea was to provide a pool of willing presenters. We all know the value of testing out our conference presentation ideas at a shoptalk. Jodi created a sign-up form for interested presenters. We hope to learn who would be interested, their topic of choice and which shoptalk they would like to present to. We’re loosely shooting for every other month kind of vibe (when possible) alternating from regional zoom to in person (as there are advantages to both).
Please see the below sign-up form to volunteer as a presenter to your local shoptalk.
FYI: The new regional zoom will start with a KAST shoptalk in the first week of October 2024.
The SCBWI-MI gets its strength from its members. We volunteer our time and expertise for the good of all. Yes, your local shoptalk needs you.
Respectfully,
David Stricklen
SCBWI-MI Shoptalk Liaison (overlord haha)
Friday, August 5, 2022
Lessons from the Critique Carousel
Having had the opportunity to be part of last year’s Author/Agent Critique Carousel gave us a birds-eye view of what to expect when dealing with agents and critiques.
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One of the most important bits of advice we can give creators is to make sure you research, research, and then do a little more research when shelling out cold hard cash for an agent critique. Check the agent’s website, their Manuscript Wish List online, and wander over to the Literary Rambles website run by Michigan’s own Natalie Aguirre, who helped us create last year’s agent list. Make sure the agent you choose represents the type of story you want critiqued. There is nothing worse than someone choosing an agent who has zero interest in what the submitter is writing. Yes, they may be great at critiquing whatever you put in front of them, but agents really want to acquire creators that line up with their wish lists. Give yourself the best chance of not only receiving a phenomenal critique, but also connecting with the right agent interested in your work.
In fact, that’s exactly what Kristin Bartley Lenz did after parting ways with her previous agent. Yes, even experienced published authors struggle finding just the right fit. Kristin only entered last year’s Critique Carousel after researching the agents on our star-studded list. According to Kristin, Sera Rivers from Martin Literary Management’s wishlist contained essentially a description of Kristin’s novel. Having already revised the story many times, Kristin sent very polished pages, written in an unusual and experimental style with multiple perspectives.Sera began her critique by saying, “These beginning pages blew me away! I read through them twice, and I honestly do not have much criticism.” She ended her critique with, “I would LOVE to read this!”
Another agent may not have been quite so into Kristin’s experimental style. It appears Sera and Kristin prove that our match-making Critique Carousel works when you’ve done your research!
There’s one more bit of advice Kristin took to heart from Sera, and it can benefit everyone seeking representation. After you’ve polished your work, flesh out your query letter and include what inspired you to write this book. Are there personal connections? Is there research you’ve done on the topic or the theme? Is your llama book based on the summer you spent on a farm in an obscure part of the world befriending a pack of llamas? Let the agent know!
Connections do happen when you put yourself out there. But for most of us, getting our work in the hands of an agent is mostly about having an actual publishing professional provide their opinion of the story you want to submit and hopefully give you what you need to make that piece stronger and marketable. Once you’ve made the changes suggested, if they ring true to your vision, send the agent your revised version along with an appropriately written cover letter. Being able to submit is one of the perks of being part of this event.
Let’s also keep in mind, agents are human. We know this is a shocker, but they have their own opinions, likes and dislikes. It’s not uncommon for two agents to have opposing opinions. During our time with SCBWI, we’ve both witnessed agents giving advice that have shut people down. DO NOT TAKE THEM TO HEART. Listen to what they have to say. If the comments ring true, then embrace them and apply them to your work-in-progress. If they don’t, try to figure out a way to use their comments to strengthen your work anyway. During last year’s events one of us was told their submitted piece read like a movie script rather than a middle-grade novel. One way to handle this is to throw a temper tantrum. This may or may not have happened. Who’s to say? A far healthier way to look at that comment is to consider your writing style might be a better fit for a graphic novel rather than a traditional book format.
If the agent you researched comes back with ways to improve your already “perfect” manuscript, consider what they have to say. They are deeply involved in the industry so their opinion—we emphasize opinion—should carry a little more weight than a family member who thinks your manuscript is the best thing ever!
Other than connecting with your dream agent, receiving at least one new thing that can be applied to your manuscript from a critique is considered a success. See if you can find that one thing that aligns with your vision and use it to strengthen your manuscript. On the flip side, if you’ve heard the same advice from more than one source, it might be worth adjusting your vision based on those comments. Sometimes the thing we fight against most is the one craft element that might make all the difference.
Good luck to those taking a spin on this year’s Critique Carousel!
Respectfully,
Your Previous Critique Carousel Coordinators,
Anita Fitch Pazner, MFA and David Stricklen, IMHO
Anita Fitch Pazner is the author of the recently released Topsy-Turvy Bus that takes kids on a journey discovering alternative energy sources and organic gardening, along with ways to help repair the world one fresh new idea at a time. Anita received her master's degree in writing for children and young adults from the Vermont College of Fine Arts. Volunteering for SCBWI has been one of the many ways she stays connected to her writing community and friends across the country.
David’s reverse perspective painting was an ArtPrize (world’s
largest attended art competition) 3D 2018 popular vote finalist & a Colors
of Community 3D & 2D (ArtPrize category) first place winner. His 2021
reverse perspective painting won 1st prize mixed media in the
Colors of Community competition.
Dave has volunteered in many roles with the SCBWI for nine
years, assisting with SCBWI conferences as a chair or go-to-guy. He is the
former Michigan Shop Talk Liaison and is the current Michigan Indie Coordinator
and Grand Rapids Shop Talk Co-coordinator.
Thursday, October 8, 2020
Indie Trailblazers by David Stricklen
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You may have noticed our beautiful new Indie Trailblazers Icon on the SCBWI-MI website.
Indie stands for independent publishing. Authors have chosen independent publishing for a variety of reasons. Full creative control, frustration with the query process, and a quick turnaround to name a few.
As your Michigan indie coordinator, I thought that we could do a bit more for the indies who are trying to find their way. The trouble with working on an independently published project is that there is more than one way. The traditional path is well worn but the indie path is like cutting your way through the literary wilderness. That is why we call our indie authors, trailblazers.
There is an obvious need to point inquiring authors in the right direction. A helpful suggestion by someone who has already been down that path (and learned from trial and error) can save time and costly mistakes.
Indie publishing would include hybrid publishing (combines aspects of traditional and self-publishing – you hire your dream team), vanity publishing (publishers do it all for you for a price), self-publishing (the author does it all) and digital. All of these various publishing methods would fall under the indie umbrella.
In an effort to provide the most current and accurate information for our members we have acquired three award winning or Kirkus review recommended indie authors to be our advisors:
Melissa Bailey - Picture Book
David Stricklen - Middle Grade
Melanie Hooyenga – Young Adult
Depending on the indie path that you are considering, you may contact one of our three advisors above that best fits your intended direction. Please keep in mind that they are not intended to take the place of a critique group. They are here to make helpful suggestions regarding the path you wish to take depending on your particular goals.
When choosing one of our indie advisors to answer your questions, you should not only look at their genre but also their process.
- Do you plan to completely self-publish?
- Are you going to enlist a dream team to complete the different aspects of publishing?
- Pay a vanity publishing company?
- Are you going to do your own artwork?
You will find information about each of our indie advisors, as well as their published work and their step by step publishing process by simply clicking on the link below to the SCBWI-MI website:
https://michigan.scbwi.org/files/2020/08/Indie-for-info-Web-Page.pdf
Coming up on the SCBWI-MI Blog:
A new post from our Equity and Inclusion Team, a special book drive, Pinterest tips, Webtoons, a Writer Spotlight, Book Birthdays, and more! The Mitten blog is always looking for guest posts from SCBWI-MI members. Find our Submission Guidelines here.
Did you notice we have a new blog banner? Thanks to our new Featured Illustrator, Wendy Berry! Read her interview here.
SCBWI-MI Happenings:
Virtual Shop Talks and Workshops will continue in the months ahead. Information is posted on the calendar at the SCBWI-MI website. Follow our chapter on social media and subscribe to the MichKids listserv for reminders, updated information, and ongoing conversation. Everything you need to stay connected is here: https://michigan.scbwi.org/online/.
Save the date!

Tuesday, April 21, 2020
SCBWI-MI Calling for Indie Mentors!
Here's a special request from SCBWI-MI Indie Coordinator, David Stricklen:
As the Michigan Indie Coordinator, I am seeking to identify our indie high achievers and ask them to consider a role as an indie mentor.
This is an important first step in an effort to provide the most current and accurate information to our members and help them choose the right indie path to publishing for them.
Indie publishing would include hybrid publishing (combines aspects of traditional and self-publishing), vanity publishing (publishers do it all for a price), self-publishing (the author does it all), and digital. All of these various publishing methods would fall under the indie umbrella.
Mentor information will be added to the SCBWI Michigan website with a link to a special page called Independently Publishing Resources. On this page, visitors will find the indie mentor's bio, links to their work, contact information and their particular publishing path. Depending on the indie path members may be considering, they will now have identified the best resources for information.
Are you an indie high achiever? Would you agree to be a resource for members on the SCBWI-MI website? At a minimum, you should be able to answer yes to the questions below.
● I have independently published at least three picture books or two novels.
● I have sold a minimum total of 2,500 books.
● I have presented at a variety of schools and/or conferences.
● I have presented my work at a variety of book fairs.
If you would like to be one of our SCBWI-MI indie mentor resources, please email indie coordinator David Stricklen.
David Stricklen is the SCBWI-MI Indie Coordinator, Grand Rapids Shop Talk Coordinator, and the overall MI Shop Talk Administrator. Learn more about his middle-grade novels at www.blackwaterpond.com.
Coming up on the Mitten Blog:
Wendy BooydeGraaff will be here this Friday with Standard Manuscript Formatting in the KidLit World - just in time to submit your manuscripts for the SCBWI-MI Nonfiction Mentorship Competition. The submission window opens on May 5th.
Friday, January 31, 2020
Self-Publishing Success
We asked two indie authors from SCBWI-MI to share their success stories. Thanks to Melanie Hooyenga for sharing her experience with contests and to David Stricklen for his experience with professional reviews. Read on for their hard-earned perspectives.
Enter At Your Own Risk
by Melanie Hooyenga
One option that I don’t feel gets enough attention is contests. Like most anything else in the world, not all contests are created equal, and you have to a) do your research, and b) know what you hope to get out of entering.
My first novel, Flicker, had been out for over a year when I heard about the Writer’s Digest Self-Published eBook Awards. A writer friend encouraged me to enter, so I submitted my book, paid my $99 entry fee, and promptly put it out of my mind—as you do with anything in the publishing industry because it’s soooo slooooowwww.
Imagine my surprise when I learned I’d won the YA/MG category! Winning came with a mention in Writer’s Digest, a review that I could blurb, $100 in writing-craft books, and a $1000 cash prize. All of this was more than I ever expected, and the one part that I felt helped me the most was the blurb. Having Writer’s Digest say that I was good enough boosted my confidence in the decisions I’d made with my writing career.
My marketing efforts for my first series were lackadaisical at best, so when I published the first book in my second series, The Slope Rules, I decided to follow a marketing plan. Aside from boosted posts, blog hops, and creating an ARC group, I researched contests.
I started with contests my friends had won, and came up with six. My criterion:
- They allowed self-published books
- The covers of past winners were well-done and didn’t scream “self-published”
- The entry fee was under $100
- All books received a review, regardless if they won
That first year, I won or placed in three of the six contests I entered (hooray!!) so with my next book, I only entered the contests where the previous book had been successful. And I won or placed in those as well! With The Edge Rules, the last book in the series, I only won/placed in two of those three, but I entered several new contests and have won a couple of those. AND, for the first time, I was a finalist in the BookLife Prize, which is the self-publishing arm of Publishers Weekly! I won the YA/MG category and best-selling author Amanda Hocking read and blurbed my book.
When researching contests, it’s important to determine what’s in it for you. Some have awards ceremonies, some give trophies or certificates, others award money or an equivalent, and some feature winners in their publications. Ultimately it comes down to what you want out of the process. Since my number one goal has always been an industry review, that’s what I’ve focused on.
Contests in which I’ve won or placed:
- Indie Reader http://indiereader.com/
- Moonbeam Children’s Book Awards http://www.moonbeamawards.com/
- Readers Favorite Book Awards https://readersfavorite.com/annual-book-award-contest.htm
- Children’s Literary Classics http://www.clcawards.org/
- Writer’s Digest Self-Published eBook Awards https://www.writersdigest.com/writers-digest-competitions/self-published-book-awards
- BookLife Prize https://booklife.com/about-us/the-booklife-prize.html
- Orange County RWA Book Buyers Best Awards http://occrwa.org/contests/book-buyers-best/
- Indie Excellence http://www.indieexcellence.com/
- IBPA Ben Franklin Awards http://ibpabenjaminfranklinawards.com/
- International Book Awards http://www.internationalbookawards.com/
- Next Generation Indie Book Awards https://indiebookawards.com/enter/entryform
- Independent Publisher Book Awards (Ippy) http://www.ippyawards.com/
This article has a good breakdown of contests for self-published, traditionally published, debut, genre-specific, and more: https://insights.bookbub.com/book-awards/.
If you belong to writing organizations, look into their contests—including regional chapters, even if you aren’t a member of those specific groups. I heard about the Orange County RWA contest through the national newsletter. The Slope Rules won a cover contest in Alaska that I entered that because they said all entries would be displayed at their annual convention—which meant the $15 entry fee placed my book in front of hundreds of people who might never have heard of my book. (And I took a chance that readers in Alaska would like a book with snow on the cover.)
I’ve had success entering contests where past books have been well-received, but that hasn’t worked every time. Like everything else in publishing, tastes are subjective and winning is never a guarantee.
Multi-award winning young adult author Melanie Hooyenga writes books about strong girls who learn to navigate life despite its challenges. She first started writing as a teenager and finds she still relates best to that age group. When not at her day job as Communications Director at a local nonprofit, you can find her wrangling her Miniature Schnauzer Owen and playing every sport imaginable with her husband Jeremy.
You can see the full list of her books and awards here: https://www.melaniehoo.com/media/awards/.
Melanie discussed the importance of book reviews in her experience with contests. Now, here's David Stricklen, SCBWI-MI's Indie Publishing Coordinator, to share his experience with reviews for his popular self-published books.
REVIEWS FROM AN INDIE PERSPECTIVE
by David Stricklen
It is all about validation. If you are an indie published author, it will generally be assumed that you are second best until you prove otherwise. I submitted my newest book, Ripley Robinson and the Worm Charmer, to Kirkus Review at a cost of $425.00. Remember, you are paying for an honest review, you are not paying for a good review. What you get is what you get. You will receive a one page review from a respected professional who will read the entire work. You can only hope there is a positive sentence in there somewhere that can be used in promoting your work in a brochure or slide presentation with the Kirkus name on it.
In this case, I lucked out. Kirkus liked it. I received a personal phone call from them and was told that it was a recommended review. My work had also been chosen (at no additional charge) as one of the reviews to go into the October 2019 issue of Kirkus Review magazine. I received a free copy of the magazine and on page 137 was the entire review with a picture of the cover. Let the book orders flow, right? Wrong, there are hundreds of reviews in the magazine and I didn’t see a jump in my website book sales.
What is the benefit then? Again, as stated above, it is for validation. I am able to mention during school visits and seminar presentations that Ripley is a Kirkus recommended book. In this way, I am validated by a respected industry professional and yes, this does help sell books. I routinely outsell the traditional titles at school visits.
Below are a few to try: Midwest Book Review and PW Booklife are free but they may not do a review for you because of the high demand. PW Booklife does have the option to pay for a guaranteed review. I hope this helps.
David Stricklen is the SCBWI-MI Indie Coordinator, Grand Rapids Shop Talk Coordinator and the overall MI Shop Talk Coordinator. Learn more about his middle-grade novels at www.blackwaterpond.com.
Learn more about reviews for self-published books at:
https://www.kirkusreviews.com/indie-reviews/
http://www.midwestbookreview.com/
https://booklife.com/about-us/publishers-weekly-reviews-and-booklife-reviews.html
Registration opens today at 6pm for the SCBWI-MI Spring Conference: Building Your Nonfiction Toolbox.
Don't delay, registration is limited to 100 participants!A variety of critiques are available, and they will sell out quickly. Go here to find the registration link and everything you need to know: https://michigan.scbwi.org/2020/01/07/building-your-nonfiction-toolbox-michigan-scbwi-spring-one-day-event/
Friday, February 8, 2019
Meet SCBWI-MI's New Indie Coordinator: David Stricklen
Friday, August 4, 2017
Writer Spotlight: Dave Stricklen
Charlie Barshaw just finished the first draft of his YA novel Aunt Agnes (working title).He also gratefully accepted an offer to work as an editor on The Mitten, where he plays around with pictures and asks Ruth innumerable questions.



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