Showing posts with label Betsy McKee Williams. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Betsy McKee Williams. Show all posts

Friday, May 20, 2022

It Starts with Hello with Betsy McKee Williams

 

Whether you’re an introvert or an extrovert or somewhere in-between based on the situation, you’ll be able to relate to the bookends in Betsy McKee Williams post: from wondering if you belong—to knowing you belong in SCBWI-MI! The welcomes, invitations, and smiles we share with others, especially those who are “frozen like the proverbial deer in the headlights” as Betsy mentions, have a huge impact in making our members feel seen and valued. And as we know, one “hello” leads to another and another!

Share an important “Hello” experience with your SCBWI-MI friends by submitting your story (300-words or less) to Isabel Estrada O’Hagin: ohaginib@gmail.com  Recently joined SCBWI? Don’t be shy--we’d love to hear from you!  


Once upon a time, I was an introverted newbie at my first SCBWI conference, unpublished, knowing nobody, and doubting that I belonged.

At my first session, I chose an empty seat, one strategically surrounded by other empty seats.

Nancy Shaw sat down beside me. She introduced herself and chatted with me. She provided helpful info and made me feel welcome, as if I had a right to be there.

Later, at mealtime I stood, tray in hand, frozen like the proverbial deer in the headlights. All the tables looked full, filled with people talking to friends. But before I could seek an empty corner, Ruth McNally Barshaw saved the day. She invited me to join her crowded table and welcomed me into their conversation.

Only later did I learn how many books Nancy and Ruth had each published. These eminent authors first welcomed me as a friend.

More invitations followed: to join a book club, to join a critique group, to help plan events, to help out at conferences. Somewhere along the way, I started extending invitations too.

I’m still an introvert, still pre-published, but approaching my goals. I’ve made good friends and learned a lot. I’m still learning. And I know I belong in SCBWI.

Betsy McKee Williams


Betsy McKee Williams supports grad student writing by day and writes for kids after hours. She writes mostly middle grade, fiction and non, and seeks precise historical accuracy when writing time travel fiction. She recently completed an MFA in Young People's Literature from the Solstice MFA Program. Betsy has been a member of SCBWI since 2012. For most of that time, she has been coordinating Shop Talks in Ann Arbor. And writing.

Friday, June 28, 2019

In Praise of Shop Talks by Betsy McKee Williams



Every month, across Michigan, Shop Talks are happening.

SCBWI members are meeting to learn aspects of craft and to connect with other writers and illustrators. Shop Talks are organized by volunteers and are free to SCBWI members. Here’s an overview of some recent Shop Talks in Ann Arbor.

Humor

Last fall, author/illustrator Deb Pilutti and middle grade novelist Vicky Lorencen gave a presentation titled: 12 1/2% Funnier: Punching Up the Humor with Words & Pictures

Deb walked us through her recent picture book project and revealed how she made subtle changes to both words and illustrations to ramp up the humor, generously sharing examples from her revision process.

Vicky shared how we can use humor to create a portal to our reader’s hearts (but not literally because, ew, that would be gross). The tips she shared are so great she listed them on her blog and then added 12 1/2 more.

We laughed a lot that morning. We learned a lot, too.

Picture Books

In January, Brianne Farley presented on Writing and Illustrating Picture Books.

Brianne shared stories from her own life and career, along with many useful tips for writers and illustrators.

Voice

In February, Michigan SCBWI Mentorship Coordinator, science writer, and novelist Ann Finkelstein presented on Making Voice Rock.

Ann led us in a discussion of what Voice is, then shared great examples and useful techniques. She also guided us through writing exercises to deepen Voice in our own works in progress.   

Publicity

In April, Michigan SCBWI Webmistress and writer Debbie Gonzales presented on
Book Trailer Basics: A Step-by-Step Process to Construction.

We viewed and discussed several book trailers, and Debbie shared her excellent resource on how to build a book trailer. She described the technical tools she uses, and shared sources of images, music, and sound effects. She also led a discussion of how the steps of creating and storyboarding a book trailer can help us identify structural and other issues in our books.

Where does a book trailer live? Debbie exhorted us all to create our own websites, and to post content on whatever consistent schedule will work for us (twice a week, maybe, or once a month.) For pre-published authors, a book trailer might be a teaser for a topic or a current project, rather than for a finished book with a title. And yes, she says pre-published authors really should create websites now, for interested agents to find.

Heart, Hurt, Hope & Humor

In June, author Shutta Crum gave us a great talk on these 4-H’s. She taught us that every book that matters must have these qualities, and shared vivid examples from picture books, and middle grade and YA novels. Shutta also walked us through specific techniques that authors and illustrators used to enhance these qualities in their books.

This presentation was an expanded version of the talk Shutta gave at the recent SCBWI Marvelous Midwest Conference.

On Shop Talks

All of these presenters are Michigan members of SCBWI, generously giving their time and sharing their knowledge. Ann Arbor also has sessions where we share our work with one another, giving and receiving helpful and kind feedback. We have had debut authors share their stories of their own Road to Publication, and enjoyed a presentation from a local youth librarian. And sometimes we share resources, maybe focused on a topic, maybe not.

Shop Talks let us learn through presentations worthy of a major writing conference. (Some presentations, like Shutta’s, were also given at major conferences.) Shop Talks help us connect. Some of us have found critique partners, beta readers, or critique groups through our local Shop Talk. Carpools also can arise from Shop Talks.

Did I mention that all of these Shop Talks are free of charge?

Ann Arbor area members are very fortunate – and we are not alone. SCBWI Michigan currently offers Shop Talks in Ann Arbor, Farmington Hills, Grand Rapids, Kalamazoo, Lansing, and Up North in Traverse City. Learn more here, contact a local Shop Talk Coordinator to ask any questions you may have, and come to talk shop at a Shop Talk.


Betsy McKee Williams lives in Ann Arbor, supports college student writing by day, and writes middle grade fiction after hours. A member of SCBWI since 2012, she is currently pursuing an MFA in Writing for Young Readers through the Solstice MFA Program at Pine Manor College. Betsy is delighted to help make Shop Talks happen.








Coming up on the Mitten Blog: 

Vacation! Enjoy the 4th of July weekend, and we'll be back mid-July with a new Featured Illustrator, Hugs and Hurrahs, and more.






Friday, August 21, 2015

SCBWI-MI Conferences: Looking Forward and Back

Registration is now open for the SCBWI-MI Fall Conference - Homegrown Talent on October 3, 2015 in Dexter, MI. The jam-packed day will feature a variety of presentations for writers and illustrators, as well as editorial critiques and portfolio reviews. 

Maybe you've already registered and are looking forward to the event (like me!) or maybe you're questioning if it's worth your time and money. Betsy McKee Williams attended the SCBWI-MI Hook of the Book conference in May, and even though the primary focus was on an amazing illustrator (E.B. Lewis), Betsy took away many lessons as a writer too.

A Writer Learns from Illustrators at Hook of the Book by Betsy McKee Williams

I’m writing middle grade novels and, while I am also interested in writing picture books, I will never be an illustrator. So I debated registering for Hook of the Book. But this conference was so close (only 10 miles from my home) and, thanks to the generosity of Thomson-Shore publishers, so affordable. And I love to learn. So I went.

I am so glad I did.

E.B. suggested that SCBWI might be called the Society of Children's Storytellers, and introduced himself as the one who "writes the pictures." 

He started his talk with a metaphor: Some of us speak English, some French or Italian, and illustrators speak Visual Language. I found this metaphor very apt, because I spent much of the day translating his advice to illustrators into words for novelists, and building conceptual bridges between words and illustrations.

Here are just a few examples.

E.B. spoke of perspective, of the angle from which we view the illustration. Are we at the characters' level? Or do we view the characters from below or from above? How far above? And how does the perspective affect our connection to the characters and to the story?
And I thought about point of view: first person, close third, omniscient...

E.B. told illustrators not to have a character look directly at readers, because doing so "breaks the wall." 
And I thought of avoiding second person point of view.

E.B. told illustrators to keep the light source consistent. He showed us images of outdoor scenes where the light and shadows were not consistent with having one sun in the sky.
And I thought of avoiding "head hopping," and of revising for consistent point of view.

E.B. and Matt Faulkner both discussed technical aspects of how they illustrate, answering questions about the steps they take from sketch or storyboard to finished illustration.
And I thought an analogy for writers might include an outline. (But I wouldn't know... I confess that I don't start with one.)

Both illustrators shared specific ideas for illustrating characters to convey personality and emotion, and for showing setting.
And I thought of much specific advice to writers on writing dialogue and showing character emotion*, and of my struggle to select only the best bits from my extensive (excessive?) research, to show historical setting without subjecting my readers to info-dumps.

Leslie Helakoski's presentation gave me a great overview of qualities to look for in published picture books, and to build into my own texts. And the QA session gave me helpful insight into how illustrators work with authors. (The short version: most work separately.)

E.B. spoke of revision, and of the love of the process. He told us to allow ourselves to make mistakes: "Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which to keep."
Those words certainly apply to writers as well as to illustrators.

At the start E.B. said that, just as we in the western world read words from left to right, we read pictures in the same way. While I think I knew that truth before the conference, I came away a much more sophisticated reader of images. And I learned a great deal about how illustrators compose and arrange images to tell a story and to hook the reader. 

Novelists and illustrators both seek that hook!


Betsy McKee Williams lives in Ann Arbor, where she balances writing for children with a full time job and coordinates local Meet Ups for SCBWI.

The next Ann Arbor Meet Up is August 29th, 10-12:00 at the Ann Arbor District Library. Shutta Crum will speak about adding "extra value" to PB manuscripts. She will also collect new or like-new books to be donated to the Martin Co. library in Kentucky.











Here's everything you need to know about the fall conference:

SCBWI-MI Fall Conference 2015: Homegrown Talent

Learn ​from ​the ​amazing ​talent ​grown ​right ​here ​in ​Michigan! ​ This ​will ​be ​a ​jam-packed ​one ​day ​conference ​held ​at ​ Thompson-Shore ​in ​Dexter, ​Michigan ​on ​Saturday, ​October ​3, ​ 2015. ​Open ​to ​all ​who ​are ​interested ​in ​creating ​literature ​ for ​children, ​it ​includes ​a ​limited ​number ​of ​onsite ​portfolio  ​reviews ​and ​written ​editorial ​critiques. ​It ​is ​going ​to ​be ​ an ​event ​that ​blossoms ​with ​enrichment, ​community, ​and ​fun. ​ Join ​us!
For information regarding the Homegrown Talent Conference access the links below!
Conference will be held at Thomson-Shore: a book publisher, printer, and distributor
7200 Joy Road
DexterMichigan 48130
(Thomson-Shore is a 100% employee owned book publisher, printer, and distributor located in Dexter, Michigan. The venue lies 18 minutes west of the heart of Ann Arbor, an hour and a half east of Kalamazoo, two hours from central Grand Rapids, and five or so from da' UP, eh.)


Coming up on the Mitten blog: Writing a Trilogy, a September back-to-school 3-part series on Voice, and another round of Hugs and Hurrahs. Please send your good news to Patti Richards at pgwrites5@gmail.com. 

Have a great weekend!
Kristin Lenz